Common Google-Visitor conflicts & how to resolve them

May 5, 2019 •

Now that you’re familiar with the best practices professional SEO copywriters use on a daily basis, let’s look at the problems you’re most likely to face when writing SEO copy.

The biggest problems are usually caused by the conflict between what Google wants and what your readers want. Following are the 15 problems you’re most likely to encounter when writing SEO copy, along with some tips on how to resolve them.

1. Keyword frequency VS readability

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2. Keyword-rich VS persuasive headings

Headings are vital to your SEO copy, so it’s important you leverage them effectively. But remember, they’re also vital for conveying your message and keeping the reader on the persuasion slippery slide.

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3. Headings that start with keywords VS headings that start with persuasion

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4. Keyword-rich VS feature/benefit-rich lists

Readers and search engines, alike, love a good bulleted list. Sadly, they disagree on what constitutes ‘good’.

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5. Bolded keywords VS bolded meaning words

This is a similar situation to the lists conflict above.

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6. Keyword-rich VS scannable VS engaging links

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7. Summaries that start with keywords VS summaries that start with meaning or persuasion

This conflict is similar to the link conflict above. So is its solution. But because the reasons for that solution are different, it’s worth discussing separately.

(Note: Summaries aren’t tagged items on a page; there’s no <summary> tag in the HTML of the page. So Google doesn’t analyze summaries the way it might analyze, say, a Title tag. Summaries do, however, tend to appear toward the start of the page, which is argued to draw Google’s attention a little more than the content toward the end of the page.)

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8. Captions that start with keywords VS captions that start with meaningful description

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9. Target keyword VS grammatical variants

The best way to discuss this conflict is through example: Assume your target keyword is “kangaroo”. Its grammatical variants would be “roo” (part) and “kangaroos” (plural). Is it OK use a grammatical variant in your copy? Or do you need to find a way to use the exact target keyword?

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10. Exact phrase VS individual words scattered across the page

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11. Long VS short copy

PreferencePercentage

Graph

All headings in title case9.30%

All headings in sentence case74.42%
A mix of both16.28%

12. Keyword prominence VS succinctness

PreferencePercentage

Graph

All headings in title case16.22%

All headings in sentence case37.84%
A mix of both45.95%

13. Title tags that start with keywords VS Title tags that start with brand

The Title tag is a line of code in the HTML behind your page. It looks something like this:

<title>Australian Institute of Architects</title>

When the page is displayed in a web browser, the Title displays at the top left:

How the Title tag displays in a web browser

How the Title tag displays in a web browser

Google uses your Title tag to generate the title of your listing in the natural search results.

How the Title tag displays in Google

How the Title tag displays in Google

StyleBenefitForm
Introduction to BusinessBeing the first thing a prospective client sees, you can engage and establish a compelling tone right off the bat.This can be text with simple narration, text with music to provide a moment of calm, or an explainer video with people in front of the camera.
Service/ Product OverviewEasy to draw focus; can be used to highlight something new or innovative.As above.
How to …Usually briefer and a lot easier to digest than in solely text form. Allows you to explain a complicated process in simple terms and control how the information is digested.A step-by-step instructions with either voiceover/ narration or background music.
(And don’t forget to consider automatic captions for those watching with sound muted)
TestimonialsAllowing clients to speak for themselves can be reassuring to the viewer, and adds a sense of authenticity. Usually a straight to camera piece.

14. Keyword-rich VS persuasive, meaningful Description tags

The Description tag is a line of code in the HTML behind your page. It looks something like this:

<META NAME="DESCRIPTION" CONTENT="Pocono Whitewater Adventures, 
whitewater rafting, paintball, mountain biking, river canoeing, 
canoeing, and kayaking on the Lehigh River and in Lehigh Gorge 
State Park. Located in Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania the heart of 
the Pocono Mountains.">

Google sometimes uses the Description tag as the description (or ‘snippet’) of your page in its search results. (Sometimes it simply compiles a snippet from the copy it finds on your page, and sometimes it grabs a description from your DMOZ description (if you have a DMOZ directory listing).)

How the Description tag is sometimes used by Google

How the Description tag is sometimes used by Google

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15. Keyword-rich VS helpful, descriptive image Alt attributes

When a vision-impaired person accesses your page, their screen reader describes pictures by reading aloud the associated Alt attributes. These attributes are defined in the HTML behind your page, and they look something like this (the bolded bit is the Alt attribute):

<img src="filename.gif" alt=
"Cheap second hand computer in use" title="Cheap second 
hand computer in use">
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